She woke on tender angel wings
like dew drops after mist
a nameless, faceless lover
with a tender, haunting kiss
his breath her only warmth
many nights without a flame
and when his shadow was no more
he took with him his name
now she wanders lonely through
darkened forests of despair
searching for his heartbeat
Breathing poisoned air
though not a witch who cursed her
nor ancient evil spell
not the siren’s symphony
to create this hell
Stumbling through brambles
bloody feet and loss of sight
screaming at her lost reflection
in the infernal night
What is this curse upon me
she searched the sky above
it has a name, a purpose
this evil known as love
at once a rushing strength
overwhelming desire
what started as a simple spark
grew into raging fire
from this fire he sprang forth
her new muse was born
and love became a gentle thing
repairing what was torn
52 responses to “Through the dark of night”
thoroughly enjoyed…
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Thank you:) I’m terribly shy about poetry.
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you have no reason to be shy…
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oh I really like this one…
flows with emotion that has so much in between the lines…
you shouldn’t be shy…you have a wonderful gift…
Take Care…
)0(
ladyblue
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Thank you, that is so kind.
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Reblogged this on snehafatehpuria18.
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Beautiful words, Ionia. Keep’em coming.
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This is beautiful, and didn’t take me where I expected. Such ovely rhythm and powerful imagery. Please, Ionia, (holding out my empty poetry bowl) I want some more!
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The first part made me sad, the second part made me glad. So very well done. (Don’t be shy). ๐
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I can’t help it. There are so many people who are so good at poetry here, and then I just let whatever comes to mind out onto paper.
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I know exactly how you feel. The thing is though, if you enjoy it, ignore them, lol. Thousands of people are better at me with drawing and whatnot but I love it so I’m just going to keep at it. (Also, you are much much better than you give yourself credit for with your poetry) ๐
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do you hear my head getting bigger too?
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I thought was my ears popping…
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I really enjoyed reading this.
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Thank you:) I appreciate that!
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This isn’t on Community Storyboards because . . .? ๐ You really are a fantastic poet. I loved how this poem told such a clear story and ran a gauntlet of emotions.
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Because I shy…..
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A shy author/blogger? Never heard of that. ๐
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Hi my name is Ionia.
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I’m Charles or Luke or Darwin . . . we haven’t decided on the true name yet.
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depends on which pants you wear that day.
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It always comes down to the hated, restrictive, unnatural pants.
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And the little dog too.
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Claude is awesome.
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He really is lol
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Shows a wonderful transition from pain to hope to peace. Nice
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Thank you John:) I’m learning a day at a time. Slowly.
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Really excellent poem. I wasn’t sure where it was going at first, but then…love, the creator of good and evil reared it’s head. Thoroughly enjoyable. ๐
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Thank you, especially important words coming from you:)
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Ionia, I always enjoy your reviews, but I truly love it when you write.
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Andra, your kindness and friendship make this worth doing every day–thank you
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Now this is poetry! It evoked emotion, visuals, loved it.
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*Blush Blush
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Another amazing poem Ionia. I am speechless, you are so very talented.
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It is lost on me I am afraid. Mi look at it and think…oops
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I lol
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Amazing. You are so talented Ionia ๐
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You are a fine one to talk lady!
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Aww, thanks ๐
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Fizzle thief
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He visits of his own free will. I’m sure it has nothing to do with the apple strudel, apple crisp, apple pie, and apple turnovers that I’ve been baking ๐
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I have apple trees too Martha Stewart
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Who told you that was my nickname?
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Ionia, this is incredibly beautiful. You are very talented (and I know, shy). I really enjoyed – and felt the emotions of – this poem.
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Thank you Katie:) still blushing though
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๐ That is totally allowed!
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You are a lovely poet. Continue to be shy but also continue to share.
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Thank you so much, did you ever post your submission from earlier, or shall I? I wasn’t certain of the plan.
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You’re welcome, Ionia, and, yes, I posted my submission. I scheduled it for May 31. Is that how we do it? It was the next available date. Thanks again for the invite. I’m really excited about the whole venture ๐
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You can schedule or just post at will:) so excited to have you with us
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Encore!
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