I wrote this poem when I was around 16 years old or so and just found it today while digging through a box of stuff. So..yeah. I’m going to post it anyway.
Watching time slip through the glass,
the wizard counts the hours.
He’s lost his only love,
she now lies amongst the flowers.
He has lived through centuries,
seen many times before.
Still there is only one for him
but one that he adores.
He travelled years to find her
beyond distance, time and space,
longing for her tender caress
from memories of her face.
Into the castle’s courtyard
he followed love’s sweet song,
past gardens full of roses
as the day grew long.
He rush in past the fountain,
beneath the dragon’s lair,
his heart turned to a mass of stone
as he saw her lying there.
The dagger lie beside her
crimson touched its tip,
he chest neither rose nor fell,
no breath escaped her lips.
He cursed the Gods above him,
for making his death slow.
With a sweeping hand he closed her eyes,
the last time they would show,
He roams the world uncertain
if they will ever meet again
and blames himself for leaving her
and causing her such pain.
Once in every lifetime,
he finds she is reborn
and once in every lifetime
apart their love is torn.
33 responses to “The Courting of Bell”
That’s amazing. I love the emotion in the poem even though it’s very sad. Your rhyme scheme is unique (at least to me) with only the second and fourth line rhyming. Seems you’ve been a poet a lot longer than we realized.
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You are kind:) this is the first thing I ever wrote in English.
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Really? I would never have guessed that. It’s very well-written.
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I think I had to try harder then lol
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I think most people were trying very hard at 16. Especially if we tried to write anything beyond school assignments.
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Yep. Then I got lazy.
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Like a cat. 😀
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A big fat lazy orange cat
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That loves lasagna
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And hates Mondays. Though, I thought you were a Nermal fan.
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You did a very good job! You had a vivid imagination even then 🙂
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This is a really terrific poem…and to think you only wrote it last year, just wonderful my friend. 🙂
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Lol I love that comment
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I’m glad, it was meant as a subtle compliment. 🙂
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I envy you, and here’s why. When I, too, was but 16, I wrote a poem called The Chains of Moebius. To this day, I am convinced it was the best poem I have ever written. It was my first. I have never been able to find it.
This poem is brilliant. Which begs the question, you mean to tell me you’ve been a genius poet the whole time?!?!? -.-
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Sahm! Find that poem!
If your mission is to make me blush like a vine ripened tomato you are quite successful! Your opinion means a lot, thank you!
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Alas, that poem will never be found. But I will always have the memory of it. Encouragement to always exceed the Self.
As for the mission, the only mission I will ever undertake is that of recovering the Universal Reboot Button. Why? Because, the Apocalypse… Listen, there can never be a conversation with me without a slant in the direction of morbidity… It’s almost like a tradition or some such. :p Seriously, though, your poetry is on point.
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Oh, Ionia, that is a truly wonderful poem. Glad you found and gladder that you posted it 🙂
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Amazing poem. Thanks for sharing this. I really liked the depth of story and the feelings of loss. The line “the last time they would show,” was really good in the context of the loss.
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Thank you John! See I have some catching up to do on your blog.
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I just read about you flood. Sorry. I sent you a flood joke.
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I love this poem – thank you for sharing it with us
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Thank you for coming to visit me:)
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💙
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Another great poem, and from when you were only 16. It is nice to see how you have developed as a poet. Still great now.
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Wow! A poet at 16! And what a heartbreaking poem. What inspired it? Do you recall?
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I was just learning English, and I had been reading fantasy novels:)
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It’s lovely! Very dreamy and unique. I love story poems. 🙂
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Thank you:)
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This conjured images of the movie Ladyhawke with Michelle Pfieffer where she and her lover were cursed to be an animal in opposite times of day, so they were always together, but always apart. Beautiful imagery and you had just learned English?! Could’ve fooled the hell outta me 🙂 Really, it may be a sad poem, but it pulls at the heart strings and your wordplay is excellent!
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Thank you so much! That means a lot. I am now wondering why it took me so long to get back to poems. Isn’t it weird how we get used to doing some type of craft or something and then it just seems to fade? I am happy to be back to poetry now, although Charles still whoops my ass in output. Competitive little bugger. 🙂
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Wow! Such tragic and beautiful love!
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This. Is. So. GORGEOUS!
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